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我是靠GMAT的,本人水平实在很菜,但拿到成绩单后竟然有6分,真是FT,主要归功模版,我的模版主要是借鉴一个6分大牛的,和各位XDJM分享ISSUE:
Recently there is a debate over
whether…..Some people assert that.., while other people believe that…As
a matter of fact, the issue of whether….. is a complex and controversial
one. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds.
Therefore, there is not a universal answer to this question, and whether
one choice takes precedence over the other may quite depend on the
specific situation. The decision, nevertheless, is not an easy one
to make. Actually, the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case
analysis. As far as I am concerned, however, I agree that…. , and
do not agree that….. My view can be greatly substantiated by the following
discussions. The first argument
that can be presented to develop my position is that…A good example
may be found in the case that…Under this circumstance, it is obvious
that…. In addition, there is another
reason for me to choose this statement. The reason is not far to seek….
To illustrate, let us consider that…Hence, another equally important
aspect is that…. Admittedly, it
may be true that…. in some conditions. However, this alone does not
constitute a sufficient support to claim that….,Actually, these cases
are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen
the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x and y are
carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that… To
sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate
with each other to generate an integrate whole and thus become more
convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say
that…., because…. ARGUMENT In
this argument, the author concludes that…To support his conclusion,
the author points out that…. In addition, the author reasons that…Further
more, he also assumes that…. At first glance, the author’s argument
appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will reveal
how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the invalidity
of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following reasons.
In the first place, this argument
rests on a gratuitous assumption that…. The author unfairly assumes
that…. However, the assumption is questionable because the author
provides no evidence to support this argument. The arguer fails to
takesintosaccount other facts that might contribute to the result
that…….. It is likely that ,……………..; it is also likely that…………………………Any
of these scenarios, if true, would show that………………….. (72) Therefore,
this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.
In the second place, the argument
commits a logic fallacy of“after this and therefore because of this”.
In no case can the mere fact that…be cited as evidence to support
the assumption that there is a causal-effect relationship between
A and B. Moreover, that just because B can be statistically correlated
with A does not necessarily mean that A is the cause of B. In fact,
the author has obviously neglected the possibility of other alternative
facts such as…, or…may contribute to a certain extent to B. It may
be only a coincidence that……. Unless the author can rule out other
factors relevant to…, this assumption in question can not be accepted.
In the third place, the evidence
that the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion
drawn from it. One example is rarely sufficient to establish a general
conclusion. Unless the arguer can show that A1 is representative of
all A, the conclusion that B…is completely unwarranted. In fact, in
face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any conclusion
at all. In the fourth place, the
argument has also committed a false analogy fallacy. The argument
rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects,
and the author assumes without justification that all things are equal,
and that the background conditions have remained the same at different
times or at different locations. There is, however, no guarantee that
this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support
this assumption. Lacking this assumption, the conclusion that…is entirely
unfounded. In fact, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn from
B are applicable to A. Differences between A and B clearly out weight
the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid.
For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult
for B to do.... In addition, the
conclusion unjustifiably relies on the poll while the validity of
the survey itself is doubtful. The poll cited by the author is too
vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who, when, how
and by whom the survey is conducted, neither does it mention what
is the sample size, or how the samples are selected. Until these questions
are answered the results are worthless as evidence to support that….
Besides, the author assumes that
A and B are mutually exclusive alternatives. However, the author has
never offered any reasons or evidences for imposing an either/or choice.
Common sense and observation tells us that adjoining both A and B
might produce better results. To
sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited
in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims.
To make the argument more convincing concerning…. , the arguer would
have to provide more information that………………. The arguer should also
demonstrate that……………….to make this argument logically acceptable.
(51) Since the author commits
the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to consider the whole
situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be adopted. The conclusion
would be strengthened if he…. In
conclusion, the arguer fails to substantiate his claim that…. Because
the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to
what the arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must
convince us that…. In addition, the arguer could have to provide more
precise information to support his claim. It
is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any
number of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior
products, careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee
expense monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies
and other wasteful spending. 作者:nbxsk
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